My name is Allie and I am the cluster manager here in Toki Pounamu. I will be one of the people commenting on your blog over the summer. I like that you have presented this with an image of your fish and chips. I am sure the fish and chips in your town are yummy. And they are always better when they are hot! You are so right!!
What else are you able to tell me about where you live? I know that it is up the Grey Valley and that it is near Ahaura. But tell me about some of the things that you like to do where you live. Do you have a special swimming place that you like to go? Do your friends live close to you? Are you on a farm? What sort of farm is it? I bet that you and your Grandma make the best chocolate chip cookies. What else do you like doing with Grandma?
Hi Zoe my name is Tarshana i like your little tiny story about fish and chips maybe you could just add a bite more about were you live and more on your fish and chips.but it is great.
Hi Zoe
ReplyDeleteMy name is Allie and I am the cluster manager here in Toki Pounamu. I will be one of the people commenting on your blog over the summer. I like that you have presented this with an image of your fish and chips. I am sure the fish and chips in your town are yummy. And they are always better when they are hot! You are so right!!
What else are you able to tell me about where you live? I know that it is up the Grey Valley and that it is near Ahaura. But tell me about some of the things that you like to do where you live.
Do you have a special swimming place that you like to go?
Do your friends live close to you?
Are you on a farm? What sort of farm is it?
I bet that you and your Grandma make the best chocolate chip cookies. What else do you like doing with Grandma?
Look forward to hearing from you Zoe.
Keep up the good work
Until next time
Allie :)
Hi Zoe my name is Tarshana i like your little tiny story about fish and chips maybe you could just add a bite more about were you live and more on your fish and chips.but it is great.
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