Dear Zoe, I love your book review about the midnight gang when they go explore around the hospital. Next time try adding a little more detail like what the name are of the people in the Midnight gang. Keep up The good work!!! From Olivia in Ahipara.
Hi Zoe,I love you poem about your self i think it is cooler then mine.i love your poem about your self because it tells me about how you and what you like. Keep up the good work!!! From Te Ana in room 5 Ahiparaschool.
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ReplyDeleteDear Zoe,
ReplyDeleteI love your book review about the midnight gang when they go explore around the hospital.
Next time try adding a little more detail like what the name are of the people in the Midnight gang.
Keep up The good work!!!
From Olivia in Ahipara.
Hi Zoe,I love you poem about your self i think it is cooler then mine.i love your poem about your self because it tells me about how you and what you like. Keep up the good work!!!
ReplyDeleteFrom Te Ana in room 5 Ahiparaschool.
hI zoe my name is wati iliked how you presented your video
ReplyDeletehi zoe my names max i liked your presentation. i liked how you added the illustrator and the auther.
ReplyDeleteyo zoe the midnight gang sounds like a awesome book to read but mabye add more detail about the book.
ReplyDeletekeep it up zoe
hi zoe, im rollin i like your presentation about this book maybe next time a bit more writing and detail to make it a bit more interesting thanks zoe
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real cool zoe
ReplyDeleteKia ora Zoe this midnight gang sounds cool
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Thanks Osheya