Hi Zoe, it's Leah from Room 6. I like the very colourful poster you have created. Your rules are well worded. Next time you could make the circle speech bubble bigger so you can see some of the words. Kind regards Leah
Hey Zoe it's Ella From Room 6 Awahono School. I really love the layout of this poster you have made it's very eye catching the colours go very well together. One thing you could do to make this poster even more awesome is try and fit all the words in the round speech bubble. I really love the superheros on this poster they look awesome, maybe next time you could try and get transparent backgrounds so we can see the awesome backgrounds. Other than those things this poster spread a great message to the younger children who have only just received their chromebooks. Good Job!! Check out my blog http://awahonoellal.blogspot.com/ From Ella
Hi Zoe, Hannah here. I enjoyed reading your post about how to keep your chrome book safe but the words were really hard to read. Next time you could make you writing bigger so that other people can read the words better.
Hi Zoe, I'm Solly from Awahono School. I like how you used some of the most important kawa of care rules. Maybe next time you could make the words bigger because it is hard to see. How long did it take you to complete this post? Keep up the incredible work.
Hi Zoe, it's Leah from Room 6. I like the very colourful poster you have created. Your rules are well worded. Next time you could make the circle speech bubble bigger so you can see some of the words.
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Leah
Hey Zoe it's Ella
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I really love the layout of this poster you have made it's very eye catching the colours go very well together. One thing you could do to make this poster even more awesome is try and fit all the words in the round speech bubble. I really love the superheros on this poster they look awesome, maybe next time you could try and get transparent backgrounds so we can see the awesome backgrounds. Other than those things this poster spread a great message to the younger children who have only just received their chromebooks. Good Job!! Check out my blog http://awahonoellal.blogspot.com/
From Ella
Hi Zoe, Hannah here. I enjoyed reading your post about how to keep your chrome book safe but the words were really hard to read. Next time you could make you writing bigger so that other people can read the words better.
ReplyDeleteHi Zoe, I'm Solly from Awahono School. I like how you used some of the most important kawa of care rules. Maybe next time you could make the words bigger because it is hard to see. How long did it take you to complete this post? Keep up the incredible work.
ReplyDeleteHi Hannah Zoe here. Thanks Hannah I will make the words bigger for next time.
ReplyDeletehi zoe it was really cool how you had such a colourful poster maybe next time you could make your writing a bit bigger.
ReplyDeletehi Zoe I liked how you have lots of detail
ReplyDeleteHi Zoe I am Carla-Rose I like how have lots of detail and you have cool characters.
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