We were learning to describe and we wrote about Summer.
Remember that time
when you got a burnt nose,
and then had to have a rest
and you got ice cream dropping all
over your t shirt?
Remember how when you felt better
you climbed a tree and you got higher than you've ever climbed before?
That was summer.
Remember that time
when you went out to dinner
and had fish and chips
and it was yummy?
Remember how we went to the beach and then we found a jellyfish?
That was summer.
Remember that time when you felt
the sand in your feet
and it was so hot
and then you had to go
to the water because it was that hot,
but it was good?
Remember how you got the food
and you had to wait until your Mum and Dad and Nana
and cousins were there?
That was summer.
Hey Zoe, Amaya here from Te Waka Ako in Waikowhai Primary School. I really like the way you told us what you did but, when you did you told us what your good memorise was when you were there. It made me think of what I did in summer. Have you thought of punting a picture of one of the memories. If you would like to see my learning blog here's my blog address,http://wpsamayap.blogspot.co.nz/
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Cool summer story Zoe, I love the way you describe the hot sand at the beach!
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That is my favorite to.
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