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Hi Zoe, Violet here I like your descriptive sentence for the holidays because the background goes with the colour of the fox and I like the sentence, it really describes the setting. Good job!
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Hi Zoe, Violet here I like your descriptive sentence for the holidays because the background goes with the colour of the fox and I like the sentence, it really describes the setting. Good job!
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