Friday 5 October 2018

Descriptive sentence for the holidays

my class had to make a google drawing with a  describes feelings of one of the characters from the book  we have read and here is mine.


2 comments:

  1. Well done, Zoe, you've chosen a sentence that does indeed describe the character's feelings? Who is the character being described in the sentence? Maybe you could tell us in your introduction. Have a reread of your introduction - I see you've copied and pasted some words so you need to adjust your sentence to make them fit in.

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  2. you've chosen a sentence that does indeed describe the character's feelings? Who is the character being described in the sentence? Maybe you could tell us in your introduction. Have a reread of your introduction - I HI Zoe my name is hannah from Awahono School. see you've copied and pasted some words so you need to adjust your sentence to make them fit in.

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