Friday 6 April 2018

Hunting and Fishing

In Room 5 we have been learning  how to describe and here is my writing.

Hunting and Fishing

 Walking to the hares that are lying on top of each other in a truck I feel sorry for them but I guess it has to happen. As I look closer I see that the hares have been shot in different places. Their eyes are staring at me. I have always wondered what hares eyes look like and they are red. And I bet the fur was soft when they were alive. But then I see some hares are in yellow bags and they are on top of the other hares. 
I walk away from the hares and I wonder what will happen to them.  

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  1. Unknown12 April 2018 at 17:40

    Hi Zoe, I like your idea about the hares eyes staring at me, and how you have always wondered what a hare's eyes look like. I like that you have gone into detail about the hares, which makes your writing very interesting for the reader. Well done.

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  2. Anonymous13 April 2018 at 09:35

    Hi Zoe,your writing is really interesting.I like the way you used lots of adjectives and I also like the way you told the people that are reading your work how you feel.
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