Hi Zoe, these two sentences give us a detailed description of a shark. You've also chosen an illustration that works really well with the description. Great idea to choose a description from a non-fiction book; anyone reading this post could learn a lot about sharks. Well done! Mrs Idle
Hi Zoe, I am Haylee from Awahono School. We read that book in our reading group. Do you like that book? Maybe next time you can say about the food they eat. Maybe some people would want to know about that. Maybe you can come to my blog.
Hi Zoe! My name is Oscar from Manukau, Te Waka Ako, Waikowhai Primary School. You have made a very interesting, descriptive piece of writing. You pointed out all the features with easy read labeling. It reminds me of when I had to do the same with a Praying Mantis. Have you considered putting a bit more in your blogpost? If you would like to see my learning my blog is https://wpsoscarc.blogspot.co.nz/, please, please, please, please, please visit it! Bye!
Hello Zoe my name is Callum from Waikowhai Primary School.I like your blog and the Shark picture.It was so detailed.I like how you put the labels about witch thing is where.I am 9 to and I like your blog.next time maybe you could add more stuff to your blog because I do not really know about you yet. If you want to see my blog it is wpscallum.blogspot.com
Hi zoe, my name is ama from waikowhai primary school,I really like your description about sharks. I love the way you used descriptive words in your work. If you would like to visit my blog, go to http://wpsamam.blogspot.co.nz/
Good work Zoe, you put a lot of time and effort into making this and getting it up on your blog. x
ReplyDeleteHi Zoe, these two sentences give us a detailed description of a shark. You've also chosen an illustration that works really well with the description. Great idea to choose a description from a non-fiction book; anyone reading this post could learn a lot about sharks. Well done!
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Hi Zoe, I am Haylee from Awahono School. We read that book in our reading group. Do you like that book? Maybe next time you can say about the food they eat. Maybe some people would want to know about that. Maybe you can come to my blog.
ReplyDeleteHi Zoe! My name is Oscar from Manukau, Te Waka Ako, Waikowhai Primary School. You have made a very interesting, descriptive piece of writing. You pointed out all the features with easy read labeling. It reminds me of when I had to do the same with a Praying Mantis. Have you considered putting a bit more in your blogpost? If you would like to see my learning my blog is https://wpsoscarc.blogspot.co.nz/, please, please, please, please, please visit it! Bye!
ReplyDeleteHello Zoe my name is Callum from Waikowhai Primary School.I like your blog and the Shark picture.It was so detailed.I like how you put the labels about witch thing is where.I am 9 to and I like your blog.next time maybe you could add more stuff to your blog because I do not really know about you yet. If you want to see my blog it is wpscallum.blogspot.com
ReplyDeleteHi zoe, my name is ama from waikowhai primary school,I really like your description about sharks. I love the way you used descriptive words in your work. If you would like to visit my blog, go to http://wpsamam.blogspot.co.nz/
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