Hi Zoe, Violet here from Awahono School. I like your Summer Learning Journey "Three Fun Facts about NZ". I also like the background of New Zealand that you put on. Great job!
I'm Evelyn and I will be working with the Summer Learning Journey team for 2018-2019 to read and follow amazing blog posts like yours! I am so excited to read what pops into that wonderful brain of yours and hope you have fun on this journey!
Those are some interesting facts about New Zealand! I love how you have put the map of New Zealand in the background to present your work, it relates very well to your post and is very eye-catching, well done Zoe! Please remember to make sure you put the information into your own words next time. What a unique and special bird we have, don't you think? Do you have friends who are from another country and do they call you a Kiwi? When I go to visit my friends in Australia, Taiwan or South Africa, they call me a Kiwi! They thought it was funny to be calling me a bird but I told them it is a normal nickname here in New Zealand. Your last fact is so surprising, that's a lot of butter and cheese! Do you like to put butter on your toast or cheese on your food? I enjoy cheese on my food and especially on my pizza!
It's great to see you using images to illustrate your blog posts. Every time that we use an image on our blog, it's really important that we tell our readers where we found it, and give credit to the owner of the picture. To properly credit a picture you will need to include a link to the site where you found the image. We have created a guide that you might find helpful. You can check it out here: https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1VKjkMGwBrk2YI6Vtmg91OAQljr_T3ZSV6YZtu6MWFNM/edit You will need to follow these instructions to earn full points for any Summer Learning Journey activity that has asked you to post an image.
Hi Zoe, Violet here from Awahono School. I like your Summer Learning Journey "Three Fun Facts about NZ". I also like the background of New Zealand that you put on. Great job!
ReplyDeleteHi Zoe, Amelia here. I like your three facts about NZ. I like how your background is relevant. Next time you could not put the numbers. From Amelia
ReplyDeleteHello Zoe,
ReplyDeleteI'm Evelyn and I will be working with the Summer Learning Journey team for 2018-2019 to read and follow amazing blog posts like yours! I am so excited to read what pops into that wonderful brain of yours and hope you have fun on this journey!
Those are some interesting facts about New Zealand! I love how you have put the map of New Zealand in the background to present your work, it relates very well to your post and is very eye-catching, well done Zoe! Please remember to make sure you put the information into your own words next time. What a unique and special bird we have, don't you think? Do you have friends who are from another country and do they call you a Kiwi? When I go to visit my friends in Australia, Taiwan or South Africa, they call me a Kiwi! They thought it was funny to be calling me a bird but I told them it is a normal nickname here in New Zealand. Your last fact is so surprising, that's a lot of butter and cheese! Do you like to put butter on your toast or cheese on your food? I enjoy cheese on my food and especially on my pizza!
Happy blogging,
Evelyn :D
Kia ora Zoe,
ReplyDeleteIt's great to see you using images to illustrate your blog posts. Every time that we use an image on our blog, it's really important that we tell our readers where we found it, and give credit to the owner of the picture. To properly credit a picture you will need to include a link to the site where you found the image. We have created a guide that you might find helpful. You can check it out here:
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1VKjkMGwBrk2YI6Vtmg91OAQljr_T3ZSV6YZtu6MWFNM/edit
You will need to follow these instructions to earn full points for any Summer Learning Journey activity that has asked you to post an image.
Keep up the good work,
Evelyn :)