Wednesday 23 December 2020

Haiku

3 comments:

  1. Hi Zoe

    You have done a really good job with this post. I see you have added a pavlova as a photo is pavlova your favourite food? That tree in the picture looks really pretty is that yours? Your haiku is really good. I like how even though you have chosen a colourful background you can still read the words.

    Keep up the amazing work

    Molly :)

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  2. Kia ora Zoe,

    My name is Fiona and I'm from the Summer Learning Journey. Great work creating a haiku poem all about family. You have done a great job and I really like the picture you have chosen of a delicious pavlova - yum!

    Is this the first time you have had a go at writing haiku poetry? I think they are so fun to create - I really enjoy working out if I have the correct number of syllables on each line.

    Keep up the great work and I look forward to seeing more of your posts over the summer.

    Ngā mihi nui,

    Fiona

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  3. Well done on creating such a bright and wonderful piece of work Zoe. I am so pleased to see you completing some of the activities in the summer learning journey.
    I love your haiku all about christmas. I truely ate too much over christmas time.

    Looking forward to seeing your next activities!

    Miss Wilson

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